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Sloppy
Sloppy by @The-Wizard-of-Zaar (The Wizard Of Zaar)

Alix loves a drink.

Some might say he has a drinking problem.

Many of the crew are concerned.

Particularly when he can no longer pour his own drink, talk's about how he's in the mood to suit up and void walk the ships bow... Or how he could take Eraam in a fight.

That's when it's time for Alix to go to bed.

Hilibi just wanted to enjoy her Purple Mc Muffins.

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Science Fiction
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Mature (D)
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Posted: Monday, 22 January, 2024 @ 10:36 PM
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Ahahaha, this is great.

Posted: Tuesday, 23 January, 2024 @ 01:08 AM
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so relatable. guy

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