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Tanks for the Memories
Tanks for the Memories by @Thorvald (El Thorvaldo)

My ninth submission to DYOS VI.

Whenever I talk about poetic dialogue, I think specifically of this comic. Not so much because it's poetry, but because it reads so theatrically over-the-top. Nowadays I'd be hard-pressed to use such flowery phrasing, at least partly because our more self-conscious stories don't offer a ready venue for such eccentricity.

This is another comic that was visibly inferior as JPEG. That said, sharp bright red on full green is probably just as textually infuriating.

[Originally submitted to DeviantArt May 2013.]


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