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Julie Ottosen

shoyru
shoyru by @odduckoasis (Julie Ottosen)

I finally decided to draw a picture of my shoyru. I really don't like the look of neopets shoy's, cuz they're kinda fat and their short little arms.. what can you do w/ arms that short? But anyways.. so I elaborated a little on it and mixed it up... so here you go. His name is Chrono (full name: Chronotrigerx5 [he was adopted]). So yeah.. anyways. Here you are.

Artwork © Copyright 2003 Julie Young

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Posted: Friday, 14 February, 2003 @ 09:11 PM

Whoo, can't wait to be rped with him! does a somersault in midair, stumbles, and crash-lands in the snow Ergh... Melikes the way you were able to make him look like a dragon^^ You might want to thicken the base of the tail, though... gets tackled by Cloudy Meep!

Posted: Friday, 14 February, 2003 @ 09:17 PM

Wooh Julie I really think you out did your self on this one! For a first attempt -or post-of a shoryu this is really really good great job! I like the way you did the design on his body most really cool. Oh and cloudy was right maby make the tail a little thicker, or leave it alone hey it could be your own style.

Posted: Saturday, 15 February, 2003 @ 12:39 PM

Yeah, I noticed a part is a little thin on his tail. I'll fix that when I color him. ^^;; I do find it funny that you're now all like "fix it if you want or don't... >>" Feel free to still tell me flaws, don't be afraid to, but mind not to repeat (too much) what someone else has already said... cuz it doesn't help a whole lot when you do that. But thanx. ^^;;

Posted: Saturday, 15 February, 2003 @ 06:08 AM

Ohhhhh! This looks SO awsome! I LOVE it! ^^ Shoys are the coolest XD! I only have 3 but they are one of my favs.... prolly cuz I'm obsessed with dragons. Anywho, I LOVE his face and his hands and feet! He is SO koo! Wonderful jobie! ^^

Posted: Saturday, 15 February, 2003 @ 10:38 AM

It's greaT, Julie ^^ I mean, neopets shoys are alright if you want something adorable, but your version is so much more realistic (and cool)

Posted: Saturday, 15 February, 2003 @ 12:13 PM

squeals Yew did such an awsome job! I wonder what it would be like to see you draw an anthro shoyshoy! I've got about a million shoys >.> but, anyways, Gerd Jorb!

Posted: Saturday, 15 February, 2003 @ 12:30 PM

Thanx. ^^;;; I have drawn a anthro shoy before.. just haven't put it up here.. I guess I could.. << lol. Hmmmmm.. Anyways, thanx again. ^^;

Posted: Wednesday, 05 March, 2003 @ 02:16 PM

Hehe, I like your pic as a sketch but you said the name would be on here but its not I'm just relly confused.

Posted: Wednesday, 05 March, 2003 @ 08:37 PM

Then you can't read very well now can you? points to description it's there for a reason. Read it for a change. -_-

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