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Jenny Romanchuk

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- Sunny Side Up - by @Ashwings (Jenny Romanchuk)

I'm trying to input perspective more in my works... it's rather hard...This is my first time doing it ^^;

I never got to go to the beach yet this summer...

Is the lens flare a little much?

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Posted: Thursday, 19 August, 2004 @ 11:41 AM

This is awesome! I love your use of colour. The sky looks amazing, as well. Personally, I think you achieved a good sense of perspective.

The lens flare isn't too much with the way you've used it here. Mostly, it's off the image, and gives the feeling that the sun really is just out of frame.

Posted: Thursday, 19 August, 2004 @ 04:07 PM

Yay! hugs I was kind of worried that it was to bright, or it looked kinda out-of-place n_n; But yeah!

Thanks :]

Posted: Thursday, 19 August, 2004 @ 11:50 AM

Awwwe! You're so cute!

I like how you did the dock and the water. Knowing you, you put a lot of time and effort into it. And your hand crafted sky is also beautiful.

I like how you did the hands and the feet. They're realistic, but not. And you gave yourself cute little pudgy toes! :3

Anyhoo. Nice pose, and nice perspective--especially for a first attempt. I notice that you managed to fit your wing symbol into it, and you're wearing your orange. n__n

Keep up th good work!

Posted: Thursday, 19 August, 2004 @ 04:08 PM
Heeeh n___n thanks Sam : ]
Posted: Thursday, 19 August, 2004 @ 11:55 AM

What a fun image. The length of the legs and the big feet along with the bright colors is just FUN.

Posted: Thursday, 19 August, 2004 @ 12:22 PM

that's real nice right there, it looks so nice and warm and summery.. the water is just beautiful, the image is perfect, it's the best summer image i've seen! DO keep up the good work!! two thumbs up!

Posted: Thursday, 19 August, 2004 @ 01:11 PM

This is great for your first perspective pic! You draw feet so well! The water looks awesome and the sun flare is fine. Wonderful job all around!

Posted: Thursday, 19 August, 2004 @ 02:43 PM

TOES. So cute. We'll have to go to the beach someday. Or at least my aunts.

I think the leg on the right looks a wee bit square, but that could just be me. I think the lens flares are fine. If you actually took a picture of this scene, you'd probably have them anyway!

Posted: Thursday, 19 August, 2004 @ 04:09 PM

Yeah YEAH! I forgot about your aunt, and that she had a pool n_n;

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