Reaptober 2: intertwined
Reaptober 2: intertwined by @Trezce (Lev)

Second entry for the reaptober challenge in Artfol: intertwined. 

This time featuring my two characters Calipso and Humn. Here she's dealing with the unrequited love from the latter. 


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Posted: Sunday, 06 October, 2024 @ 04:57 PM

His/Her affections come with a price. Is the vibe I'm getting here. The content quality is very crisp and over all well-done.

Posted: Tuesday, 08 October, 2024 @ 08:51 PM
Rating: 5

@Nigane:thanks so much and I'm sorry for the late response. Pretty much, especially because she's not interested on him, but he won't admit a No for answer and will insist until she accepts him, not caringf if this is what she wants or not. 

He's certainly not a good person at all :c

Posted: Sunday, 06 October, 2024 @ 05:11 PM
Rating: 5

"Unrequited love" feels like an understatement considering she is literally tied up in the red string. The symbolism is much stronger than the description. I don't know if that was your intention or not. The visuals and the colors tell quite the story. Very nicely done.

Posted: Tuesday, 08 October, 2024 @ 08:49 PM
Rating: 5

@fragmented_imagination:

Thank you! Hah, yeah, there's a lot of story behind, but I wanted to keep the description short because I have a bad habit of making walls of texts when posting content related to my characters, which usually drives people away 😅

Basically he claims to be in love with her, but she's not interested at all. The problem is he won't take a no for answer and will force his love onto her as he is an entitled entity who hates to have denied something he wants. :c

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