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Grateful...
Grateful... by @odduckoasis (Julie Ottosen)

Okee... this was inspired by a rp. koff (no kidding..)

Anyways.. this is my Desagro (the char that's based off of Snape and Sirius from Harry Potter) and my friend Laura's sorcress char Sedusora. I like to rp Des in 'anthro Harry Potter land' and make Des the Potions Teacher. I have yet to actually rp like.. the students.. lol. But yeah... Remember, Des is only based on looks off of Snape and his animagi form off of Sirius, his personality is not the same. So anyways.. Des was talking to Sedusora and she was telling him about her painful past (She's actually quite old) and he just listened and spoke to her a little. Then when she was getting up to leave for the next class, she stopped said "Thanks again.." and gave him a kiss on the lips, then left. XD; He was a bit surprised yes... heh.

[I fixed the mistakes, her lips look better now, and her hair is correct. ^^;]

Sedusora © Laura Blackbeard Artwork © Copyright 2003 Julie Young

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Posted: Friday, 28 March, 2003 @ 06:20 PM
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Ooh this is a nice piccy hmm her lips do look kinda wierd but i can't put my finger on it at the moment I'll have too look at it longer. I have a lupe kid that I want to rp as a wizard but I don't know anyone who has any "magical" pets shrugs anyhoo (ignore my previous rantings) great piccy I love it ^_^ this would look good colored.

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Posted: Friday, 28 March, 2003 @ 07:33 PM
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^^ eeee!!!!huggles Sedusora XD quite old :P ya she does have curly hair ;) and to fix the lips you might want to make her top lip a bit bigger...and her eyes were sposed to be closed but i luffle this piccy anyways ^^

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Posted: Friday, 28 March, 2003 @ 09:19 PM
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Yeah they do look odd, the lips, but it looks way better then drawing of side view of an anthro I tried to pull off.goes back to fixing

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Posted: Saturday, 29 March, 2003 @ 01:35 PM
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WOW, nice scene, but shouldn't He look more suprised, like his eyes larger at the top so his eyes would be looking suprisely at her, that's just a quick impression,

But still, really pretty!

Posted: Saturday, 29 March, 2003 @ 03:48 PM
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Well, yes, you'd think that wouldn't you? I did his expression like this on purpose though, to show that he was more or less just kinda like "uhh.." and not knowing how to react exactly. But yeah.. ^^; That's Des for you.

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