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Brandon Ballenger

Night Blossom
Night Blossom by @Jansu (Brandon Ballenger)

Flower I did quickly yesterday morning, just for the sake of doing something, really. The back petals shouldn't curl up I suppose, but when I started it I didn't know I was going to make it into a flower, and just for the fun of it I did it all on one layer. Just to impose a restriction on myself I guess, and I didn't really feel like redoing any part of it, so I left the petals up. Perhaps those petals are still unfolding.

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20y168d ago
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Posted: Sunday, 13 June, 2004 @ 02:32 PM

Purty flower! ^-^ The water came out really nicely with the moonlight reflecting on the water's surface... Making water is pretty hard... And I don't see anything wrong with the back petals curling... Only suggestion I could make is that there should be light sourcing from behind the flower, leaving the front dark and the back with a kinda yellowish glow, like the water... But it's still really purty and a great attempt at "painting"! ^-^

Posted: Monday, 14 June, 2004 @ 03:28 AM

Now, that's not half bad! The flower looks a LOT better than any flower -I- could draw. :p Though, the best feature of the picture, in my opinion is the water. It looks nice and choppy! ^^

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