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Christmas '15
Christmas '15 by @Thorvald (El Thorvaldo)

My tenth submission to DYOS XII. [link]

And thus the Christmas curse returned full force. While I'd figured out how I'd do it at the start of the month, it was a ridiculously busy December and I literally only scrounged the time to do it after Christmas proper. Shaky as it is I managed some good expressions in this, and at least it's got a good momentum. Cross your fingers for this year...

Captain2, choxorn, CivGeneral, @Danimarion, e350tb, JohannaK, Kan' Sharuminar, Stylesrj, taillesskangaru, and Till © themselves.

[Originally submitted to DeviantArt December 2016.]

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Posted: Thursday, 18 May, 2023 @ 06:32 PM

Had you tried the Postal Approach?

Posted: Thursday, 18 May, 2023 @ 08:41 PM

@Warehouse_Rabbit: Not exactly, but if I ever get Part II back on track, I have a parody earmarked specifically for that thread:

Sirens blare—are you writin'?
In the air: planes dogfightin'
"A good day to die"?
Good folks will ask "why?"
Combat in a Christmastime campaign...

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