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Unhidden Agenda
Unhidden Agenda by @Thorvald (El Thorvaldo)

My seventh submission to DYOS VI.

Lordy, we're just scratching the story's surface and I'm already taking jabs at Canadian politics.

This was the comic that brought General Kwai into the fold; Stylesrj had already showcased every other Zero Hour character, even the unused boss Ironside. The afterword is partially right; we did see much more of him, but not in the way I'd planned: I brought him back later in an attempt to counteract Styles' rampant stereotyping, but in a bizarre twist of fate, Kwai became one of his frequent supporting characters while my plot priorities were demanded elsewhere.

[Originally submitted to DeviantArt May 2013.]


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