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Factory of Madness: The Blood Haired Butcher
Factory of Madness: The Blood Haired Butcher by @rollee (Rollee Bitterblossom)

The ruins of Piedmont Factory are haunted by the ghosts of the children who were once made to toil endlessly in its walls, all the way to their demise in the Night of the Fire. Trapped in the building they hated in life, each ghost is an echo of their own unique tragedy. Some struggle to maintain some semblance of their humanity, others are now completely lost in the madness of death. This is their story


If Billy is the charismatic leader of Piedmont's imaginary crusade against the living, then Rheena is his fanatic champion. Dopped off at Piedmont’s doors, abandoned by her mother, Rheena was betrayed by the adult she most trusted at an early age. At the factory she experienced the worst of the adult overseer’s cruelty, when they flayed her back with a belt embedded with nails. Hurt by every adult she has ever met in her life, it is easy to see where she draws her hate from.

The scars on her back now burn like hot embers. Rheena isn’t drawn by mere blind sadism, to her every kill is personal and excruciatingly intimate. After breaking her victims into submission she skins them alive. The bodies, still writhing and hollering, are hoisted up to the rafters by riggings or nailed to the walls, trophies for all to see and hear.

“Because they deserve it! Let em keep coming. I ain’t done. Not close. Not ever!” - Rheena Craft


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Posted: Tuesday, 17 October, 2023 @ 06:37 PM
Rating: 5

My God, man! This girl just didn't have a chance, did she?

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