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Nihilina Gloomee

Missatrio's First Curse

By Bobbetta S. James

She was once a human being, trapped in her personal flesh prison,
she also used to be picked in as a child back in elementary school, kids did nothing but make fun of everything, even her outfits which mostly consists of only dark or dim colors, nothing vibrant or colorful at all.

Missatrio always believed she's cursed to messed around with by annoying humans here and there, so Missatrio slowly growing pitch black horns of bitterness and contempt over time, sometimes her horns looks like corrupted crown of thorns. She sometimes wonders to herself, "why am I of all people getting picked on?" over and over again on repeat, every single day.

So Missatrio decided to make a plan, curse everyone in the elementary school for life, but first she has to wait until high school to do this curse.

So Missatrio walked to the 5 opalai store and bought, 6 black candles, a human heart, evil potion, and a 1000 curses book.

Friday has passed and Missatrio has set up the ritual for the bad luck curse to use on everyone that pestered her since elementary school, while some of the kids from her elementary school apologized and made amends over time, the rest of the students of Grimpepper high didn't care about apologizing to her, so they still pick on her no matter what she does, they always provoke her when her back is turned. So Missatrio finished her bad luck curse and directed it to the people that still bully her no matter what, one issue persists, if a bunch of people get cursed the curse maker gets bad luck as well.

So Missatrio cursed 7 kids that still bully her and herself. Missatrio painfully grew more black horns from all around her forehead and the back of her head, her dark skin turned dark grey, her eyes turned a darker grey, she grew to 12 feet long and her school uniform warped into a ankle length dress with three spikes on her chest.

Missatrio looked in the mirror, she screamed in anguish,
waking up her parents, both lf them looked confused and frightened for what they're seeing,
the daughter they made hoping that she'll make some friends from school, is sadly becoming a monster full of nothing but searing hatred for humans.

"Missy, c'mon sweetheart, everything's going to be alright!" "No mother, everything will never be alright, nothing will."

Missatrio looked at her parents with tears bubbling in her eyes, she only has an angry and sad look on her face.

Missatrio years later has lived in her own house since she moved out of her parents home back in 2002, she still regrets making that curse towards the 7 kids that still picked her her back in highschool, she's now a monster full of hatred of humanity, so she always ends up killing people for fun on the weekends.

-The End-

Missatrio's First Curse by @N0-11 (Nihilina Gloomee)

A simple story about Missatrio become the misanthropic monster she is today.

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Posted: Tuesday, 03 October, 2023 @ 04:32 PM

@N0-11:

She was once a human being, trapped in her personal flesh prison

Adeptus Mechanicus wants to know your location.

she also used to be picked in as a child

I read that as pickled in and was like "Oh right, this is Goretober." D:

I love how the bulk of this is your typical high school angst and then the last line just casually drops "Also, she became a serial killer." XD

Posted: Saturday, 13 April, 2024 @ 01:54 AM

@Thorvald: Yeah, that ending is unintentionally funny

Posted: Tuesday, 03 October, 2023 @ 02:15 PM

@N0-11: Next time before I post a litureture submission, copy paste the text from my notes story to replace broken frame image.

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