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pain... by @odduckoasis (Julie Ottosen)

This is a pic that was inspired by my friend Kara. It's her char Fhaux. It relates to the pic I colored of Laura's. Fhaux is just really upset and getting really depressed.... <<; But I dunno how depressed she'll get. Not enough to kill herself, but something bad might happen... who knows..

Anyways.. those aren't lyrics, sounds like it though eh? I wrote it. ^^; Hope you likes Kara.

Fhaux © Kara 2002-03 Artwork © Copyright 2003 Julie Young

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Posted: Tuesday, 08 April, 2003 @ 07:32 PM

accroding to ME, I would be first post, YAY but that is still so sad, by the way, great pic! love the position, just a question here...

Does she knows that Thomas knows about her loving Ethan?

Posted: Tuesday, 08 April, 2003 @ 07:32 PM

It's a very nice picture and looks like you took awhile to color. Also the words are very nice. You could have said they were lyrics and no one would have been able to tell the difference

Posted: Tuesday, 08 April, 2003 @ 07:35 PM

sobbles and klings to Fhaux i heart the piccy sooooooooooooooooooooooo much Julie-chan! ye haff no idea! ;_; i heart yew!! its awesome as always =)

Fhaux: curls up in corner

Posted: Tuesday, 08 April, 2003 @ 07:42 PM

aww it is so sad ;-; The words fit in great. ^.~

oh yeah before I forget, I made a song and you're welcomed to use it when ever as long as the words are (c) to me. I saw this pic, and read the words, and got hit with a song. So I wrote it, I hope yew like it ^.~ anywho 'tis great

Posted: Tuesday, 08 April, 2003 @ 07:49 PM

.< forgot to tell you where the music is hehe. It's on my pet's page. It goes for him, but like I said ya'll can use it...

http://home.neopets.com/templates/homepage.phtml?pet_name=Jastas_shayne

Posted: Tuesday, 08 April, 2003 @ 09:33 PM

Know wat would be a good lyrics for a piccy like this one..My Immortal by Evanescense ((i think i spelled that wrong but i am too lazy to go get my Cd) ish a sad song it wouldnt fit exactly for this pic but it is still a good song I like all there songs..(heh)) but i am not spossed to talk botu songs i spossed to commet on pic Well ish a very veyr nice pic she looks soo sad

Posted: Tuesday, 08 April, 2003 @ 11:19 PM

It's so beautiful, mucho depressing, but beautiful. Her eyes are amazing, they're so pain filled, you can see the way she's hurting. I wonder if there is just something about white lupes that causes them to kinda have hard lives. I mean there is Fhaux (obviously) and Lu and Jade and Ethan, the amazing, gorgeous, incredibly sexy... eyes glaze over and starts drooling head snaps up Uh, where was I, oh yes, white lupes with hard lives, quite interesting really.

Posted: Thursday, 10 April, 2003 @ 01:54 PM

Wow this pic is rally good. The shading is beautiful too, she looks very sad, but her eyes don't qutie convey it, I am not sure how to make them look sadder, but it's jsut an idea.

Whats Fhaux's full name? On neo that is?

Posted: Thursday, 10 April, 2003 @ 03:51 PM

well, I tried my best to make her really upset looking... I could narrow the eyes a little more I suppose, but meh.. no biggie.

Fhaux is her full name. ^^;

Posted: Friday, 11 April, 2003 @ 07:29 PM

wow... she actually kinda looks like the singer from evessence (can't spell it either...). This is really cool, i love the words ;)

Posted: Sunday, 13 April, 2003 @ 11:42 PM

hey, I just wanted to know what is Thomas's full neo name? Fhaux looks like the whole world is falling apart ;-; The lyrics are fantastic Julie.

Posted: Thursday, 17 April, 2003 @ 01:52 PM

Amazing, this pic reminds me of myself. I love your art and thanks to you, I've started my own art career. God, I sound idiotic.

Posted: Saturday, 26 April, 2003 @ 10:13 PM

OMG! This is soo good...I am speechless! You can tell her sadness by her eyes...WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!

Posted: Monday, 28 April, 2003 @ 03:20 PM

This picceh is really good. A lupess of mine called Qetso was in a position like Fhaux. Only it probably wasn't that bad.

Posted: Tuesday, 29 April, 2003 @ 06:49 PM

Ok,this is stupid,but...why is she sad?!I mean,she's got Ethan,doesn't she?Or has something happened between them?

Posted: Tuesday, 29 April, 2003 @ 11:11 PM

Why didn't I comment on this before? <<

I think it's awesome Julie, really I do ^^ Everything is great. Just one thing.. Her hair, it kinda looks like it's oily and such.. Maybe it's supposed to be like that, or maybe it's just me. Everything else that doesn't puzzle me looks great XD It's awesome, Julie, it really is ^^

And, for that Firewoman person.. No, nothing happened between her and Ethan. It has to do with Thomas. If yeh go back one pic you'll see, go to the pic before this.

Again, great work Julie =D Dies (Help me oO;;)

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