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Yoshimi Page 4
Yoshimi Page 4 by @deaddays (John Rios)

Overkill? Maybe. But are you complaining? Nah.

Page 4!!! Or as I aptly refer to it: "DA MONEY SHOT YO." I was blind for 3 hours after completing this page. So, SO very proud of it. Probably one of the more dynamic things I've ever created. Sigh, I am happy. Finally my one of my comics has a suitable climax. Sure the my other comics has pretty good climaxes (Killer Balloon comic had several!), but this one makes me the most satisfied. I hope it does you too!

I'm putting the greys on page 5, the last and final page of "Yoshimi"'s short run, but WHAT A RUN! Plus, I had so much fun, I just might make another. And another. Last page coming at ya tomarrow! Thanks for watching and EXTRA THANKS FOR YOU COMMENTERS OUT THERE! You're comments keep my pen moving you know. BYE!

-John Artwork © Copyright 2003 John Rios

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Posted: Saturday, 17 May, 2003 @ 01:32 PM
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Squeek! I would like to see more Yoshimi!! fan Ooh, and you're right about that climax thingy. It's best so far :D!!

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Posted: Sunday, 18 May, 2003 @ 04:27 AM
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i cant believe that last panel. it just screams powerfull. thats one of the most amazing things ive seen you do yet.

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Posted: Monday, 19 May, 2003 @ 11:43 PM
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Outstanding. I can't believe the effects you've used on this comic; it's so lively. And that last shot is incredible. Keep it up! =D

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