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Summer Haiku
Summer Haiku by @fragmented_imagination (B Sanders)

Atsui kaze
Heiyo o fukitsu
Hi no ishi ka
"Hot winds
"Blew across the plains.
"Is this the sun's will?"

It has been incredibly hot and windy where I live lately.

© 2023 B Sanders

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1y109d ago
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oekaki Japanese calligraphy poetry haiku summer heat
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Posted: Saturday, 05 August, 2023 @ 04:42 AM
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Awesome.

You okay?

Posted: Saturday, 05 August, 2023 @ 04:46 AM
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@VerseOfDreams: Oh, I'm fine. Nothing I haven't dealt with before, but I am quite looking forward to autumn.

Posted: Saturday, 05 August, 2023 @ 05:31 AM
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Posted: Saturday, 05 August, 2023 @ 03:52 PM
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I would send a chilly breeze and a thunderstorm, if I could.

Posted: Saturday, 05 August, 2023 @ 08:05 PM
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@Cynicallia: Somebody sent something; we've had thunderstorms since the morning after I posted that.

Posted: Saturday, 05 August, 2023 @ 10:39 PM
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@fragmented_imagination: That sounds awesome. I'm living in a hazy sauna. A storm would be very welcome here.

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