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DYOS 10: The Avatar Wars

Unscratchable Itch
Unscratchable Itch by @Thorvald (El Thorvaldo)

My 86th submission to DYOS X. [link]

Writing the interrogations was both an amusement and a challenge. There is meaning behind each and every one, but I purposely left it open-ended to see who'd be willing to oblige my little game of detective. I think I had at least two other scripts that were shared with lord_joakim and @GenMarshall, but which I ultimately skipped, partly over time constraints.

[Originally submitted to DeviantArt February 2012.]


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Posted: Monday, 27 March, 2023 @ 07:16 PM

What about them fancy new restaurants for cats?

Posted: Monday, 27 March, 2023 @ 07:47 PM
Posted: Saturday, 01 April, 2023 @ 08:44 PM

@Thorvald: this pleases the gods

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