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DYOS 10.5: Plans Within Plans

Brusilov Goes AWOL
Brusilov Goes AWOL by @Thorvald (El Thorvaldo)

My 17th submission to DYOS X.ii. [link]

If there's one thing that's clear in Part II, it's that people have more connections than they'll freely admit. Indeed, while my plethora of characters span innumerable disciplines, they all interrelate with each other, often in unexpected ways. Brusilov spends 270 days off the radar to pursue under-the-table help, although the only contact we meet is Kuraki. I had planned for at least one more relating to @GenMarshall's speculative re-enactment of the North African campaign, but that was scrubbed after he short-cut it by moving all the fighting to space.

[Originally submitted to DeviantArt February 2012.]


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