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DYOS 10.5: Plans Within Plans

'Sordid Game of Tennis'
'Sordid Game of Tennis' by @Thorvald (El Thorvaldo)

My 33rd submission to DYOS X.ii. [link]

This comic explains how the Luxury Diamond, last known in the hands of the Stylesrj Avatar Army, became the Gem on Arrakis. It also helps explain how Commander Laes came about in DYOS 11.

I found it quite amusing how in spite of everything else revealed, @GenMarshall latched onto the line about being wrapped around Toyoda's finger. He really didn't care for this arc. =P

Frederick IV © Westwood Studios;
Stylesrj & Commander Laes © Stylesrj.

[Originally submitted to DeviantArt February 2012.]


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