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DYOS 10.5: Plans Within Plans

Sinking Ships
Sinking Ships by @Thorvald (El Thorvaldo)

My 42nd submission to DYOS X.ii. [link]

Obviously Drouault's estimate was in error. :|

The conversation between Jill and Thorvald is based on a script from @GenMarshall . What never ceases to amaze me is how casually his characters treat his procession of love interests; it's as if he's trying to pick a shirt for the day. This comic was quite difficult for me to write: at the same time I was trying to express my indignation over what is a potential extramarital affair, I was also trying to work within CG's parameters. The end result is a compromise, but hopefully one that leans to my side.

Either way, someone's gonna cry. 

Jill Valentine © Capcom.

[Originally submitted to DeviantArt February 2012.]


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