B Sanders
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'Two Chiefs' (Latek Version) by B Sanders (@fragmented_imagination)

A tale of the Latez tribe of the world of Otnva. It tells how the troubles of two chiefs of the Western Nomads speak to the chief of the spirits, Lapeqatboq, led to the creation of Otnva's sun Ochnne (Latek: Jalma) and the moon Ermya (Latek: Knoqma). This recording is rendered in Latek, one of the languages of the Western Nomads and the chief language of the Latez tribe in particular.

This is my first story recorded to audio as well as the first time I spend a lengthy amount of time speaking one of my constructed languages. Please bear with me, as the audio is crude (recorded with the microphone from a gaming headset) and full of splices thanks to me trying to speak a tonal language with a number of odd consonants. I can only hope the background music helps cover up the noise the microphone picked up. An English translation of the story is available here.

Story © 2022 B Sanders

"The Cradle of Your Soul" was created by lemonmusicstudio from Pixabay.

Category:
Storytelling
Rating:
Everyone
Class:
Finished Work
Submitted:
43 days and 17 hours ago
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