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Shoreline Poetry
Shoreline Poetry by @Thorvald (El Thorvaldo)

Excerpt from "The Active Voice", Scenes from a Small City, by Lauris Edmond, OBE. There are several of these tablets lining the waterfront in a project called the Wellington Writers Walk. I decided to upload this one since the combination of the evening light and an actual backdrop lends it the perfect maritime frame.

Original photo taken May 2014. Submitted to DeviantArt September 2015.

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