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And Then There Were Six
And Then There Were Six by @Thorvald (El Thorvaldo)

My 45th submission to DYOS XI. [link]

At the rate this is going, half the courtroom will consist of Law Council ex-presidents. :p

[Originally submitted to DeviantArt February 2012.]


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Posted: Thursday, 19 January, 2023 @ 07:09 PM
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Okay, I'm getting curious. What's the charge?

Posted: Friday, 20 January, 2023 @ 09:32 PM

@fragmented_imagination: So way back in the previous story, one of the regular contributors made a joke that spun into its own subplot. Unfortunately for Stylesrj, I'd been on a bit of a legal bender recently and seized the opportunity to flex my knowledge.

We'd originally been planning to do a proper collaboration, but RJ was attention-deficit at best, and when I presented him some template sketch poses for prospective comics, he told me point-blank he was no longer interested. "I will have my trial" subsequently became something of a running gag, and he was finally arrested at the end of XI—the retrial occurs off-screen and leaves him bankrupt at the start of DYOS XII.

But I'm nothing if not stubborn, and as I've told several people, I intend to give the episode its fair go one day.

Posted: Saturday, 21 January, 2023 @ 05:19 AM

@Thorvald: Good luck with that. It sounds like fun.

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