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DYOS 10.5: Plans Within Plans

Legacy of Khan
Legacy of Khan by @Thorvald (El Thorvaldo)

My 19th submission to DYOS X.ii. [link]

And so begins my subversive quest to associate Toyoda with major milestones in DYOS history. The real question is, to what extent did he actively instigate them? ;)

Gmod may be a good sandbox game, but to the amateur machinimist it can result in pretty poor cinematography. You'll see I had to rebalance lighting in a number of panels, and even then the outlines are murky. That said, I'm quite proud of Tanaka's expressions.

choxorn © himself;
Map and models by various Facepunchers.

[Originally submitted to DeviantArt January 2014.]


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Posted: Wednesday, 05 April, 2023 @ 04:48 AM
Rating: 5

For someone who works in what sounds like an ammo bunker in the middle of nowhere, he seems to know quite a bit about Toyoda...

Posted: Wednesday, 05 April, 2023 @ 05:10 PM

@fragmented_imagination: As this story is still in progress and the full details are only known to a handful of close confidants who are AWOL/no longer active contributors, I shall simply leave this:

"Every soldier must know, before he goes into battle, how the little battle he is to fight fits into the larger picture, and how the success of his fighting will influence the battle as a whole."
—Bernard Montgomery

Posted: Thursday, 06 April, 2023 @ 01:50 AM

@Thorvald: Confirms my expectations, then. Got it.

Posted: Thursday, 06 April, 2023 @ 03:57 PM

@fragmented_imagination: I chose the subtitle "Plans Within Plans' with purpose. B-)

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