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Twenty Years
Twenty Years by @Thorvald (El Thorvaldo)
My 34th submission to DYOS XII: [[link]](https://forums.civfanatics.com/threads/draw-your-own-story-at-plots-end.502368/post-16482934)

"DRAW Your Own Story!", a spin-off of several writing-relay threads, was posted by CivCube 17 July 2003, launching a much more successful franchise. I knew I wanted to put something up for the anniversary; I'd originally hoped to pick up a trailer comic for the current thread spoofing Pirates of the Caribbean: At World's End, which I'd begun before DYOS 12 went to air and that has lingered incomplete ever since; unfortunately bureaucratic BS shanghaied what was supposed to be my "free week" last June.

Fortunately, "A Brief History of CivGeneral" struck me earlier in the year, so I knew I had a ready fall-back. As usual, I wound up redlining, but apart from Peter's Anime Eyes in Panel 2, this turned out quite good.

CivGeneral © himself.

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Posted: Friday, 15 September, 2023 @ 12:52 AM
Rating: 5

DYOS has existed for as long i’ve been alive WHAAAAAAT. it’s so cool how you’ve been going at it for soo long

Posted: Friday, 15 September, 2023 @ 07:33 PM

@Camazotz: God, imagine growing up in the DYOSverse. XD

Admittedly it's ground to a glacial drip-feed these days, but a few True Believers keep the torch burning.

Plus if CG doesn't cough up the goods, I'll repurpose it as a furry comic. >:3

Posted: Wednesday, 25 October, 2023 @ 07:54 PM


Posted: Wednesday, 25 October, 2023 @ 09:34 PM

@Camazotz: *laughs maniacally*

For real though: first sign I'm succumbing to B*zzlyism, you have full authority to take me out. :x

Posted: Monday, 06 November, 2023 @ 09:17 PM
Posted: Monday, 06 November, 2023 @ 10:02 PM
Posted: Monday, 06 November, 2023 @ 10:25 PM

@Camazotz: "give us a reason to stay after the last person we truly trusted just told us to run."

The first time as tragedy,

The second time as farce.

(better screenshot the comments before they're unpersoned for crimethink :X )

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